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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-10-19 03:03 AM




Yet he

be a mountain man

though circumstances
  dull refrain

yet he

does all one man can
  while cursing flesh

that still remains...

blocking all that he desires

yet he,

  builds

his dreams in tall--

even castles made of sand

constructed by a gentle man--CAN be.


"yet he"

(does what he does best)

yet he

leaves us all more blessed

than we ever were before--

he yet stormed us with his word.

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-19-2002 03:20 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-19 08:34 AM



Wranx HAS racked up a bit of following, hasn't he!   I, too enjoy his writings...

Hey Wranx!  Get back in here and give us a little more to read!

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2 posted 2002-10-19 10:28 AM


This is great...enjoyed.


H.

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3 posted 2002-10-19 11:20 AM


Karen, "He'  should be well pleased with this poetry you have written for him. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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4 posted 2002-10-19 11:33 AM



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5 posted 2002-10-19 03:56 PM


We have a weakness for wranx around here. Lovely tribute missy.
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6 posted 2002-10-19 04:00 PM


Ooooh love this!!
I'm sure Ed will love it as well.

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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7 posted 2002-10-19 04:37 PM




(sigh) Oh Karen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just know Eddie will love this so much too as he truly is a remarkable person who I know will perservere through any storm! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-10-19 05:02 PM


This is wondeful. He'll just love it. Very nicely penned.
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9 posted 2002-10-19 10:06 PM


Ah Jeez, witch

Look what you done.
It's a lovely thing, that you've written here.

You didn't have to, you know?
I'm not mad, that you said I looked like a YETI!

Really!

Thanks to the rest of you as well, I am again, abashed.

Gosh,

Ed

Turns out, that others, (unbeknownst to me) think so as well. I guess that I should stay clear of the Northwest.

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10 posted 2002-10-19 11:09 PM


Ed---I happen to know that Yeti's are good people--er---or something! HUGS you--thanks for being another brother--grin--perhaps someday I can introduce you to Sasquatch--
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11 posted 2002-10-21 02:44 PM


Like a mountain itself,
stones looming,
this verse.

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