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Right Wing
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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oh the fall to recall patterned in flight unforseeing the tailspin downturns in decline of crimes I've committed less captured and broken a bird in the hand flying solo through dreams sustained by the right wing that angles above letting go of the strings releasing my love~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
sustained by the right wing that angles above letting go of the strings releasing my love~ I like this. It's soft and sad. Nicely done. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Crimes? Hmmmm. Stealing a heart, maybe?  Nice write.If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Not too sad, I'm just learning to come to terms...thanks for reading Rosey Anne~ Now Larry I'm innocent until proven guilty, then again I only have to answer to myself...sooooo I'm guilty...... Thankyouverymuch!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Bruised wings usually heal. Broken wings? Sometimes. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
yep, you have to earn them if you want to stay on top, which often times is easier than it looks. Thanks for the read Kacy~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Lori, this is soooooo powerfully heartwrenching, sweet friend, I think we can all be testified by these foolish crimes every now and then and sometimes we can' help but feel guilty if we ever are going to grow stronger and mature on! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
lori a beautiful write from you always! your words are amazing my friend,, just something so special with how you express yourself...this is lovely! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - singing blue with that pretty smile... Nice write... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
BluesSerenade, I like this very much. Thanks for sharing. Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Noah~ I don't aspire to perfection but I do want to write half way decent....thank you always for encouraging me... Amy~ I don't hold a candle to you..therefore I am honored by your gracious replies.....take care of you~ Bill~ I don't mean to seem so blue...life goes on and I will too. Thank you for your kind words~ Ethel~ I suspect your Gary is one lucky guy....you're sweet, and thanks for reading. |
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