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WhiteRose
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0 posted 10-18-2002 08:47 PM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for WhiteRose



A vision, soft
of pale skin
slipping into water..

a

slow

    slide


into liquid scent
to refresh
the rose's bloom.


WhiteRose

"my reflection becomes me"

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1 posted 10-18-2002 08:51 PM       View Profile for majnu   Email majnu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for majnu

cute. the slide might be better as:

A vision, soft
of pale skin
slipping into water..
                     a
                      slow
                          slide
                               into liquid scent
                                                     to refresh
                                                                 the rose's bloom.
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I see. That works for me. Nice, thank you.
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(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is just delightful, sweet friend, I love this, life and beauty always is portrayed in your words, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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Lovely & Soft...enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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excellent! and actually I had never thought of that before you said it...garden tub...what a concept! (pardon the blonde side of me) the write is very romantic too I might add.
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Anne, this is very nice and refresing. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel
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That is a very nice slide of words.
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sweet!
 
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