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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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A vision, soft of pale skin slipping into water.. a slow slide into liquid scent to refresh the rose's bloom. WhiteRose "my reflection becomes me" |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
cute. the slide might be better as: A vision, soft of pale skin slipping into water.. a slow slide into liquid scent to refresh the rose's bloom. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I see. That works for me. Nice, thank you.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is just delightful, sweet friend, I love this, life and beauty always is portrayed in your words, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely & Soft...enjoyed. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! and actually I had never thought of that before you said it...garden tub...what a concept! (pardon the blonde side of me) the write is very romantic too I might add. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, this is very nice and refresing. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
That is a very nice slide of words. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet! |
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