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0 posted 2002-10-18 01:56 AM




The metamorphosis
is nearly complete...

Yet I so wanted
to remain
winged,
free from
all constraints.

The struggle
to release
myself
was worth
the fight
to achieve
fantastic height
in my flight.

Oh, if only
freedom
would last
forever,
I would
continue
the struggle.



© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-18 01:58 AM


Kacy,
Dream baby...dream!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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2 posted 2002-10-18 02:04 AM


Dreams of Peace, forever.
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3 posted 2002-10-18 10:51 AM


It's worth the struggle so that you can continue to enjoy the "fantastic height" in your flight!

What's worth having is "worth the fight"!

This was really good!

Linda

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4 posted 2002-10-18 10:54 AM


Midnitesun
It renews with every day. Enjoyed

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5 posted 2002-10-18 10:57 AM


EA, SY, thanks to both of you, for the altitude adjustment.
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6 posted 2002-10-18 11:39 PM


Attitude or altitude?  Maybe both.  
Think you got it bad?  Try making a parallel adjustment...lol.
Just when I thought I understood this, ya lost me, Kacy.  So it goes.

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7 posted 2002-10-19 12:52 PM


LOL at your reply, Duncan. Aren't lateral adjustments the easiest?
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8 posted 2002-10-19 04:56 PM




(smiles) Oh Kacy, yes, while I have felt so much sadness and pressure in my early life I am blessed I have become as free as ever and now that I have weathered the worst part I am willing to struggle until I achieve eternal self-peace! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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