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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-10-17 10:21 PM


I talk to you and I feel light--

warm caress tempered by breeze.

I hear your voice

and want to bathe

deeply

in the rest of you...

something in me

prays profound

silent grace

gratuity

mere pennies scattered

to the gods

but everything I have

is yours...

always I know this be so.


Thank you--sight--

beneath the glass

giving kisses to a corpse

awakening

the sleeping me

seeing beauty

through defile

that transcends

miles of land

and etches in

the prison walls--

another scratch

of pity me...


I would kiss

each fingertip

and trace the lines

of life and heart

within your palm

to fit my hand

fingers laced

in understand...


I would--

if that would not undo

all the things

that make up you...

So I sit in malcontent

awaiting

vision of your eyes

everchange in

mirror-me

grateful

for the shivering

goosebumps

and those hairs on neck

that trumpet-calls

your presence here--

in me...


[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-18-2002 02:46 AM).]

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-10-17 10:55 PM


Karen, this is a very good poem. Very thought provoking. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.


Love to All,
Ethel

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
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2 posted 2002-10-18 01:00 AM


you have done it

you have writ
the silence
of grace
you have craved

and mirrored my silence
of gaze
I   ----- amazed

this is inadequate reply
there will be more
when
I can breathe

I love you
b

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-10-18 01:10 AM


and you?

increase

my capacity

just through

the swelling beat

of heart...

you give me

vocabulary

of all I can't describe.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2002-10-18 12:54 PM



and I

sit in sweet surrender

of this lovely lovely...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-18-2002 12:55 PM).]

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