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A Snifter of Silly/Serious Snippets
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A Snifter of Silly/Serious Snippets |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533
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Adam's choice in chewzing was towards Love his bite once bit meant losing God above yet I who took the bait sin alone without a mate, phantom rib pain, infernal life, a hand sans glove Cain let jealousy dine on his brain stoned his brother's head, his hands bloodstained he should have stuck with weed but sowed a murd'rous seed through that vein we live the bane of rock cocaine Lot alloted time to flee the trouble he churned to earn some distance from the rubble his wife was the caboose turned to peek the silly goose there are bits of her among my tears and stubble Iscariot ratted Jesus for some coin his intellect stay hid behind his loin pay a penny for his thought awful reek is what you got now the stink of traitors greed's forever joined. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is very clever. You did a great job playing with the serious in silly. Nice, I enjoyed.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This snifter was full of dandy brandy! ---full bodied, flavorful, rich bouquet and very smooth! EA |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Richard, I love the way you put your interpretation of the Scriptures in this poem It's very good. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Ah, sir, where were you when I had to suffer through all those Sunday School teachers? Ha! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells You have dipped deep into your well for this one. All this and more has touched my mind and yet I am blind. |
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