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Whispers in the Wind

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DarkShroud
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0 posted 10-17-2002 07:53 PM       View Profile for DarkShroud   Email DarkShroud   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkShroud

I can't whisper in your ear,
my thoughts, worrys or concerns.
But I can whisper them into the wind,
And hope they will reach you.
For I know the wind,
Will carry my words to you.
But whether you listen is another story.
I hope my words will reach you.

DS
10-17-02

May you laugh, but not too much;
May you live with relish,
And may you love with all you have!

[This message has been edited by DarkShroud (10-17-2002 07:56 PM).]

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 10-17-2002 08:59 PM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

A wonderful wish. For words to be carried on the wind, and even more, for them to be heard. Very nice.
DarkShroud
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2 posted 10-17-2002 09:59 PM       View Profile for DarkShroud   Email DarkShroud   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkShroud

WhiteRose------thank you very much!

DS

May you laugh, but not too much;
May you live with relish,
And may you love with all you have!

Enotneicna
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3 posted 10-17-2002 10:13 PM       View Profile for Enotneicna   Email Enotneicna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Enotneicna's Home Page   View IP for Enotneicna

Avi......I like this one very much!
friends always
Sharon

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!


Earth Angel
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4 posted 10-18-2002 12:17 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

I did not have to read your poem. A gentle breeze carried your words through my open window and were whispered into my ear---and I liked what I heard!

Earth Angel
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5 posted 10-18-2002 12:36 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Avayon, I loved this poem. I could almost feel the wind and hear your whispers. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel
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6 posted 10-18-2002 02:58 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

I love the whispered feel of this.
Nice to meet you, DS.
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7 posted 10-18-2002 11:34 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Avayon~

Welcome to the family circle of Passions !
This is simply a lovely piece of word-thoughts~
I sure hope to see more of your writing~
*Hugs* of encouragement~
~*Marge*~

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they will
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