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DarkShroud
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since 2002-09-25
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0 posted 2002-10-17 07:47 PM


Stand beneath me,
I will shade you from the sun.
Stand beneath me,
I will protect you from the rain.
Stand beneath me too long,
I will weep for you.

DS
10-16-02


May you laugh, but not too much;
May you live with relish,
And may you love with all you have!

[This message has been edited by DarkShroud (10-17-2002 07:59 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Avayon Thorp - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-10-17 08:59 PM


Very nicely done. Enjoyed
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
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2 posted 2002-10-17 09:40 PM


I liked this a lot. Very sweet, true love.


Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

DarkShroud
Junior Member
since 2002-09-25
Posts 15

3 posted 2002-10-17 10:02 PM


WhiteRose------I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Pat----Thank you.

DS

May you laugh, but not too much;
May you live with relish,
And may you love with all you have!

Enotneicna
Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA
4 posted 2002-10-17 10:11 PM


Avi......this is soo pretty!!!
friends always
Sharon

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



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