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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-17 04:35 PM



A moment I could spare my love
to spend in time with you
I'll show you what a sigh does hold
come admire passion's view.

I'll give this small bit of daydream
present it as gift of heart
pure pleasure wrapped with a bow
and the sting of eros dart.

Here, this moment I give to thee
share this gift of time with me.

WhiteRose


[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (10-17-2002 04:36 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-10-17 06:57 PM


WhiteRose~
Just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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*Stubby*
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2 posted 2002-10-17 07:13 PM


Very Nice Thankyou J  

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-10-17 10:14 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

scorpio
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4 posted 2002-10-17 10:20 PM


"I'll show you what a sigh does hold.."...a sigh expresses so much emotion...sometimes tells us more than words...

...believe what your heart feels...

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-10-17 10:22 PM


"...the sting of Eros dart"...ooh, that is goood!

EA

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6 posted 2002-10-17 10:37 PM


Anne, this is a very good poem. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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7 posted 2002-10-18 12:03 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may this special moment of love always fill your heart and treat you with that warm afterglow forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-10-18 12:12 PM


Ahhhhh very sensual and lovely
I sure enjoyed this wonderful treasure
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Suetang
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9 posted 2002-10-18 12:16 PM


Hello Anne

This was simply exquisite and so much enjoyed.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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10 posted 2002-10-18 10:45 AM


How very beautiful. *S* Whether you're talking about your kids, a dear friend, your mate, or anyone else important to you... the gift of time is an unforgettable, unequaled gift of self. *S*
WhiteRose
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11 posted 2002-10-18 07:58 PM


Thank you Marge, glad you enjoyed.

Stubby, Thank you, and you're welcome.

Julie, thanks so much.

Thank you scorpio for your comments.

Linda, as always, glad something I wrote touched ya somehow.

Ethel, your comments are always appreciated.

Noah, thanks for commenting and for always being so sweet.

Thanks Cher, for reading and for your lovely response.

Sue, thank you, what a lovely thing to say. I'm glad you enjoyed.

suthern, thanks dear friend. I'm always happy to know you enjoyed.

passing shadows
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12 posted 2002-10-19 06:12 AM


and you never know when you don't have time to give or receive anymore, that is what makes it a special gift, to be cherished for days to come.
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