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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-10-17 01:28 PM

Let Me Show You

let me show you
the way to my heart
it is a journey where
fantasy and reality part
yet, it is true
I like the sensual dance
where one takes another
to the art of romance
it takes a tender touch
to hold a heart in hand
love has the gentle strength
to know and still understand

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (10-18-2002 12:31 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-10-17 01:36 PM

1slick_lady,
Need you say more, I think not.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-10-17 01:47 PM

You show much
with your fine words

Gloom

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

3 posted 2002-10-17 01:48 PM

The Siren Sings and my heart rings with the joy that her writing brings to my thoughts as I contemplate what it is she has delivered to all who read and how many feel the way I do when she puts pen to paper or fingers to keys that unlock literature with such ease.

Helen great write again back to back
Thomas

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-10-17 10:33 PM

Nice write, Helen

~Ed

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-17 10:40 PM

Helen, this is a very nice poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel....garysgirl

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-17 11:46 PM

(sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may your love always hold your heart gently in the hands of faithfulness and offer you true loves beauty forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!