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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


0 posted 10-17-2002 01:28 PM       View Profile for 1slick_lady   Email 1slick_lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit 1slick_lady's Home Page   View IP for 1slick_lady


Let Me Show You


let me show you
the way to my heart
it is a journey where
fantasy and reality part
yet, it is true
I like the sensual dance
where one takes another
to the art of romance
it takes a tender touch
to hold a heart in hand
love has the gentle strength
to know and still understand



Iím not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (10-18-2002 12:31 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 10-17-2002 01:36 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

1slick_lady,
Need you say more, I think not.

Professor Gloom
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since 07-23-2000
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of Depression


2 posted 10-17-2002 01:47 PM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

You show much
with your fine words

Gloom
Thomas119gold
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)


3 posted 10-17-2002 01:48 PM       View Profile for Thomas119gold   Email Thomas119gold   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Thomas119gold's Home Page   View IP for Thomas119gold

The Siren Sings and my heart rings with the joy that her writing brings to my thoughts as I contemplate what it is she has delivered to all who read and how many feel the way I do when she puts pen to paper or fingers to keys that unlock literature with such ease.

Helen great write again back to back
Thomas
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Moved from a shack to a barn


4 posted 10-17-2002 10:33 PM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Nice write, Helen

~Ed
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5 posted 10-17-2002 10:40 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Helen, this is a very nice poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel....garysgirl
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(sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may your love always hold your heart gently in the hands of faithfulness and offer you true loves beauty forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-17-2002 11:47 PM).]

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Nice!
passing shadows
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yes!
 
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