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Solid Ground and Intangible Shadows

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Professor Gloom
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of Depression


0 posted 10-17-2002 07:14 AM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom


Solid ground
Where tired feet pound
Across which I walk silent
No mutterings are casually spent
As I’m walking through shadow after shadow
Consumed by sorrow upon sorrow
Wishing to fall deeply in
And there my time spend
In the ground.


Gloom
A response to serenity blaze’s Poem “Quicksand”


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


1 posted 10-17-2002 09:33 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

a very interesting write

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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon


2 posted 10-17-2002 09:50 AM       View Profile for WhiteRose   Email WhiteRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhiteRose

Ah..morning gloom. Nicely done gloomy.
passing shadows
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displaced


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I know
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Love the title...and the shifting feel of the words you used.

 
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