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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2002-10-17 12:10 PM



Need

Wanting to hear you
Craving to feel your sweet touch
Living to love you

© Copyright 2002 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-10-17 12:12 PM


rosepetals25 - lovely, from a warm heart...

BC

CSKpoet
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2 posted 2002-10-17 12:17 PM


yes a very lovely and warm write. enjoyed
Cher

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Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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3 posted 2002-10-17 12:34 PM


Bill - Thank you and congrats on your 5000th post  

Cher - Thanks for stopping in   I'm glad you liked.

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (10-17-2002 12:34 AM).]

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4 posted 2002-10-17 07:40 AM


The feelings of a deep love so well expressed in "Need"...Wonderful write...    

...believe what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2002-10-17 08:14 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend I hope you and your Davey meet soon as you are so deserving of this happiness! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, God Bless You, hope all is alright, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana
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6 posted 2002-10-17 09:55 AM


enjoyed
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7 posted 2002-10-17 09:58 AM


rosepetals25
A soft and lovely write.

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2002-10-17 10:07 AM


Beautifully captured in so few words, Tara ... just lovely.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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