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In Between |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Between I cherish the moments, those in my hold framed in my mind, some treasured like gold, though recent of memories have claimed me now cold as I sift through and separate, the scatterings' unfold. I cherished those moments that brought us to be, held on as if dancing in slow memory forgotten by him, long agos he set free as I think on those days when I loved all of he. I cherish the tender of a hand brushing mine I miss the emotions in silent design. I have asked all the questions, no answers define in between now, I sacrifice, my love's in decline. So what of those moments, those cherished of two Torn now, a heart in remembrance of you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah such a sad sonnet Maureen... Very well done...much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - in between, I know what you mean... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, And as one lets go you have a hand to offer the future. Well done write. Your writing fascinates me. Peace.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Nancy, I was in a contemplative mood the other day...thinking about what was and what won't be any longer. Bill, yes I know that you know where I am coming from and I appreciate your thoughtful comments hugs M Larry, I am not sure about what fascinates you, but I am glad you stop by to read...thank you Maureen |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Maureen~ This is such a sad, yet beautiful write. I felt the emotion as I read. Very nicely done, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks Vicky..I went to a class reunion and I guess back in October I was thinking about my past, the years together and how it would be to go alone to the next reunion in November....which I did, it was fun, although everyone asked about him... I survived it all  hugss M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-04-2002 07:28 PM).] |
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Ice_Queen Junior Member
since 2002-12-04
Posts 29Delaware, USA |
Gotta say this is this the best on I've read so far. Eloquent, perfectly rhthymic, original rhymes...awesome and beautiful, and I can't see any room for improvement. Groovy Oovy |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, this is a beautiful poem, even though it is sad. BTW, I'm glad that I read your reply to Vicky, and that you had a good time at your reunion. Thanks for sharing your fine poetry, friend :squeezw: "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-04-2002 09:08 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ice_Queen, hmm well I don't usually write for improvements sake..just for my enjoyment and expression. But thank you for the compliment. *s M Ethel, thank you for reading me *s M |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Sometimes we must see clearly where we've been before we can know where we want to go--enjoyed!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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