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Auguste
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By the sea

0 posted 2002-10-16 04:29 PM




One day I’ll fly three thousand miles,
meet Martie and dear Mister Toe.
I’ll pet Unprecious on the head,
switch cats with them, they’ll never know.

Their Needless looks just like my cat,
but sometimes mine is mean as hell.
I’ll give them Slippie, run real fast.
Don’t let them know, please do not tell.

My cat makes me take her to eat
and never lets me out of sight.
When I’m outside she peeps through blinds
and sleeps atop my legs at night.

Be patient, Needless, soon I’ll come,
then you can live beside the sea.
I’ll feed you pizza, chicken wings
and you’ll be comfortable with me.

I’ll drink a beer and celebrate,
but something tells me it won’t work.
I’m feeling guilt about the swap.
I love my cat, feel like a jerk.

But still, it might be worth a try.
If not, then I can switch them back.
After nightfall when it’s quiet,
I’ll put Needless in paper sack.

Dear Martie loves her animals.
I know she’ll love my Slippie too.
I’ll give Needless a happy home,
am sure Martie won’t have a clue.


© Copyright 2002 Michael Auguste - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-16 04:54 PM


LOL This was a good one. I enjoyed it

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-10-16 05:18 PM


surely you jest. great!
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3 posted 2002-10-16 05:59 PM


ROFLOL, Michael!!!  You could never get Needful in a carrier to take home....never.  She is a free spirit and hates to be confined..give her the open spaces and the bird aviery to sit beneath, not the ocean.  The only water she likes is in the fish pond.

They do look so much alike though...interesting that their people are friends.  You are too cute!  

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4 posted 2002-10-16 06:01 PM


Ahhh what a cute write Michael!!
Loved it..thanks for the smiles!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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5 posted 2002-10-16 06:04 PM


Oh please instead can you come here
take Inky please, for him I fear
he bites, he hisses, he hates me
come take him, and leave slippie.

This is just so cute. Nicely done!

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6 posted 2002-10-16 06:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I love it, I wish for you to meet them both soon as I dream of meeting you so much too! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-10-17 11:24 AM


Adorable write for our friend Martie.  Well done Michael.
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8 posted 2002-10-17 12:19 PM


Michael, I love this. It's so cute. But, most of all, I like the way all of you wonderful people are welcoming back one of your "family of friends". Marti was gone when I came here at the end of last month, but she has already introduced herself to me. She is a very sweet person and deserving of all the love you sweet people are giving her. Thanks to all for sharing your kind hearts.
Love To All,
Ethel...garysgirl

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9 posted 2002-10-17 06:26 PM


enjoyed
Auguste
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10 posted 2002-10-18 12:39 PM


I'm glad I was able to give y'all a laugh.  Thanks dearly for your generous replies.   *hugs* to each of you!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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11 posted 2002-10-19 09:38 AM


Now you've got me missing all of the cats in my life...

To my cats...

Snowball
Frisky
Blackie
Stupid
Samantha
Pepper
Claude
Cleo

I still smile over the thought of you, just as I am smiling over this poem...

Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 2002-10-19 12:06 PM


Smiiiiiiiiiling
Liz

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13 posted 2002-10-19 04:33 PM



This was purrrr-fect!

EA

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oh
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