She Writes Like a Hedonist

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Open Poetry #23

She Writes Like a Hedonist

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-10-16 01:51 PM

Janet Marie wanted me to write something for her to read. Here y' go...

She Writes Like a Hedonist
Pen tremblebursting ink,
versing worming missive's drink.
Rain dissolving in the wave.

Placing surging ocean's heat,
dark and rhythm for tide's beat.
Flees the headrock's slip and sink.

Bloodstones turning roads to paths,
glueing up her heart in halves.
Autumn eyes no longer blink.

Flows apart in sudden stops;
extinct faces, burning drops.
Cold and wet, a hungry pane.
Simple words falling again.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-10-16 01:53 PM

Oh I love this. A very good thing

Nice write Mike.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-10-16 02:15 PM

Placing surging ocean's heat,
dark and rhythm for tide's beat.
Flees the headrock's slip and sink.

Bloodstones turning roads to paths,
glueing up her heart in halves.
Autumn eyes no longer blink.

Flows apart in sudden stops;
extinct faces, burning drops.
Cold and wet, a hungry pane.
Simple words falling again.
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Oh a moth just loves getting her way

thank you Mike...I was hoping you saw my request on Sen's poem...I MISS reading you...tell the boss that we have a poetry union...they have to give us poe-breaks

I love this...I love the pace of your rhymes and the colors of your words.

Bloodstones turning roads to paths,
glueing up her heart in halves.

could those lines and images be any cooler?

So...would ya think me a greedy moth to ask for more??

TY groovy-guy

Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining.

John O'Donohue
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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2002-10-16 02:23 PM

nice work Mikey..and I see the moth approved.. ( chuckling)

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