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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-10-16 11:26 AM

~Diminishing joy
dreams fade upon winds of time.
A candle burns out.~

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-16-2002 11:29 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-10-16 11:37 AM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Donna, I know this feeling ever so much, for that is how I am feeling right now. (sad sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, I send angel hugs to those who also feel this way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-10-16 11:43 AM

dreaming memories
waking to flickering light
wind touches candles

Gloom

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

3 posted 2002-10-16 12:40 PM

THIS, is a power-packed piece of work.
The last line hits hard.
Awesome Gentle Spirit!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-10-16 12:44 PM

May dreams be fueled
by flame atop of candle
that gives life
to dark of shadow.

A lovely expression Donna.

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

5 posted 2002-10-16 12:47 PM

Donna,

This is another very sad write. I do enjoy your writings though.

Dawn

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-10-16 12:54 PM

Donna, if you are going through a difficult time, it sure as heaven hasn't affected your writing! This is a piece of perfect poetry--albeit very sad...

Your words will find a home in my library.

~ I'm sending you some of the eternal flame so that your candle will never dim ~

Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-10-16 01:11 PM

Beautiful sweet poetess...just beautiful!!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2002-10-16 04:04 PM

Donna, hauntingly sad, yet beautiful at the same time.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2002-10-17 11:27 AM

My thanks and love to all. Hugs.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

10 posted 2002-10-17 03:57 PM

What a wonderful and powerful write.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-10-17 04:47 PM

Donna, I love this. You are so good at this type poetry, as well as all the other types you write. Thanks for sharing all of them.

Love To All,
Ethel

*Stubby*
Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 122

12 posted 2002-10-17 07:24 PM

What can I say?? thankyou J

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2002-10-29 01:36 AM

and it happens just like that...wow, so well put!

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

14 posted 2002-10-29 03:20 AM

You maybe are the best surgeon a person could know. I so love this poem. Thank you.

[This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (10-29-2002 03:23 AM).]

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