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Open Poetry #23

Treasure of Morning

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-16 10:13 AM

The treasure of morning
gentle slide of sunless air
into window opened slightly
caress of fresh, just there
upon skin still sleepy
eyes of dreamy cast
sounds still muted
from night just past.

This aura of awakening
that comes with break of day
felt within my room
the mist of morning haze
Still present on the grass
I see through open glass
the smell of life appeals
it has a pungent feel.

Centralized sensations
warmth of heart does come
the smell of morning breaking
in the midst of sweet Autumn.

WhiteRose 10/16/02

"The first rule of poetry, write what you know."

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2002-10-16 10:20 AM

Lovely! And there's such a freshness about this line:

caress of fresh, just there

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

2 posted 2002-10-16 11:06 AM

This is such a gentle way to arise this morning...lovely, just serene and lovely.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-10-16 12:22 PM

This is "sens"ational! Truly it is.

As I have said so many times before, you write the words of that which I see through mine own eyes!

EA

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-10-16 12:40 PM

Vas, I am so glad that you enjoyed. I love the fresh feel of morning. Thanks for your reply.

Marti, it was a lovely morning here. Thank you for reading and responding.

Linda, A sensory, sensation of sensational sense.

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

5 posted 2002-10-16 12:57 PM

Beautiful

Dawn

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