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To My Love (Sonnet)
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To My Love (Sonnet) |
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naphoria2k2 New Member
since 2002-10-16
Posts 4 |
Her voice sings like harmonious aria, Forevermore complacent in my eyes. She sings to the tune of the exalted reverent, Forevermore congenial to my cries. She lives for the tower of repose, The phantasmal and tranquil oasis of rapture. She sleeps in the berth of apparitions, On benevolent and stalwart pasture. She follows from the river of emanation, The superfluous ornament of her saintly essence. She lies in enchanting thought and revelry, And stands in incandescence. And on this base of lovely pariah, I tune to the song of brilliant aria. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is exquisite. A wonderful feel to it that slides right over me as I read. Lovely!  |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
 i like. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome dear poet!---and you are a poet, as is evidenced with this eloquent sonnet of love! Wonderful debut! You are among friends who want to read what you want to write! Earth Angel |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, I just love the incandescense of your smile in hese words, yay, make true love sing in you eternally, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i love the way you place the whole sonnet within the word aria. with minimal effort you add music to the piece. cool |
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