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secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
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0 posted 2002-10-16 05:33 AM


Who I am

Asking my self
Who I am
Feeling my heart confusing
Don’t know what I want
What I need
What I feel
Hating my self for while
Feeling jealous

Who I am
What I really want
What’s wrong with me
The heart is bleeding and bleeding
Needing once to immigrate

Who I am
Am I just a silly body
Without a soul
Wishing to live without a mind
To stop thinking and remembering
The pain memory
The old story

Who I am
My heart is wondering
While the eyes are shading a tears
When the life will end
When we can stop breathing
How our destiny will be
When our heart will leave his throbs

Who I am
Who I am inside
This is the word I am asking
To reach the answer of my wonders
Needing something
But what
I am here now
Can you see me now
Can you see how I am still a live
But who I am can you tell me
Did any body feels like I feel

Who I am
Why I have to be as I am
Questions always in mind
But normally we get used
At least I am still here as I am
The same situation of knowing who I am

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)



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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-10-16 12:42 PM


A lot of thought went into this. I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

DawnG
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2 posted 2002-10-16 12:45 PM


Secretlife,

I ask myself these questions all the time. I liked this write.

                          Dawn

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
3 posted 2002-10-16 01:09 PM


quote:
"Am I just a silly body Without a soul"....
....."
My heart is wondering While the eyes are shading a tears"


The heart wouldn't wonder and the eyes wouldn't cry, with out a soul.
Painful words penned on this page, and if it's true to your
life and not just a write, I hope and pray that you find peace for yourself.
Hugs to you....

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

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