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CSKpoet
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0 posted 2002-10-16 01:09 AM


Intensive Care


Meeting you was such
A work of fate
Who would think
I’d find the love
Of my life
At this late date?
And here we were;
Both savagely torn …
Life’s ragings and storm
Suddenly…….
Our hearts again warm

We talked for hours…
Remember?
Right through
Waikiki showers
I just didn’t notice
Did you?

Yes! Cupid had his way
The arrow shot with care
And a year later
We are stronger than ever
Nothing can separate us
Except us……… or God….

And now begging to plead
My heart in earnest prayer, bleed
That God answer prayers
To my plea and sends you
Safe and healed
right back home to me
The hours seem like eternity….
But I know you are wrapped in love
Intensive care from high above…



Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa


[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (10-16-2002 01:12 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-16 01:13 AM


Your prayers are from a loving and caring heart, and I am sure they will be answered.  A lovely prayer of a wonderful love it seems.

  

Let there be peace on earth, and let it begin with me.

CSKpoet
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2 posted 2002-10-16 01:22 AM


Thank you sweet lady, Sharon I appreciate your comment..Yes this man means so much to me and I am just waiting and praying...and pacing and not even writing all that well, right now
But it helped me deal with it..I appreciate you kind and gentle ways and I hope all is well with you and yours
hugs and love, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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3 posted 2002-10-16 01:54 AM


Cher, this is so beautifully written. I know exactly how you're feeling, because I'm apart from my true love now. I miss him so much, even though it's only been two days since I saw him. Thanks for sharing your feelings.
Love To All,
Ethel

CSKpoet
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4 posted 2002-10-16 04:22 AM


Ethel, Thanks for comments and your warmth and comforting heart. Yes missing them makes us of how aware we are of the love...
I hope you are reunited real soon
hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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5 posted 2002-10-16 01:16 PM


I hope you are able to be together again soon.

                Dawn

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6 posted 2002-10-16 01:21 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Cheryl, I know this feeling ever so much and today  I have felt glum missing my Joanna so much and sad that she may not love me like she used to! (sigh) My prayers go out to you and I wish nothing but happiness for you both forever, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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7 posted 2002-10-16 01:22 PM


This is so sweet

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-10-16 01:24 PM


CSKpoet
A wonderful write and may my prayers make things right.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2002-10-16 02:40 PM


Whoa! My heart nearly left my chest with this one.

I am sending loving and healing light to you both. God bless!

Linda

CSKpoet
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10 posted 2002-10-16 11:40 PM


Tahks to all of you for your loving comments and prayers.
My loved one is in the hospital with blood clots on his lungs and his heart is also taking a beating...I am so much in love with him.
After a 25 year abusive marriage ended last year,I met this wonderful man.I pray he heals and comes home soon.
thanks for caring fellow poets
Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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