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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
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since 2002-09-20
Posts 155
Fraggle Rock

0 posted 2002-10-16 12:59 PM


It'd be an interesting sight to see how this one is taken.. go ahead and give it your best shot

A hundred times
Or more
I find you
Staring at me
Clawing at my back door
And a hundred times
Or more
You know
I'll take you back
No matter
How many times
You walk out that door
Go on
Stare at me
With those nonchalant eyes
Because you know
A hundred times
Or more
I'm going to
Take you in my arms
And cry
So go on
Purr me your song
Because you know
A hundred times
Or more
You'll always end up
Back in my bed
Rubbing up against me
Between these sheets..



Consider yourself fuzzed

[This message has been edited by FuzzyFrazzledFraggle (10-16-2002 01:00 AM).]

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Hearts_Dance
Junior Member
since 2002-09-30
Posts 31

1 posted 2002-10-16 01:21 AM


Well I was thinking cat, but after your opening comment, about taking our best shot, I'm not so sure. But, I'm still saying cat!
majnu
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since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088
SF Bay Area
2 posted 2002-10-16 01:45 AM


how about a tomcatting mate
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-10-16 11:05 AM



This could have been taken as the theme for an old country song---lover is tom-catting around but worms his way back into his woman's bed  

OR

Your snuggly little pussy cat has a bit of of wild streak but faithfully returns to his hearth and home and the one he loves--you!

I choose the latter theme and that, to me, makes this a very cute riddle of a poem!

EA

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
4 posted 2002-10-16 11:12 AM


Sounds like a naughty alley cat to me!

Or a straying lover!

Marti

clumsy
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since 2002-10-10
Posts 106
canada.
5 posted 2002-10-16 11:13 AM


loverly hehe.
it was pertiful. ^_^

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