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0 posted 2002-10-15 11:16 PM


OH   HOW  I  MISS  YOU
by Ethel

Oh, my Love, how I miss you right now
But, we have to make it through somehow

I just talked to you, Darling, on the phone
But now, without you, I feel so all alone

I hear such love in your voice as we talk
In this life together we should walk

In my heart you constantly do stay
But, oh so nice if beside me you lay

The nights are the worst, it seems to me
But days at times also happen to be

Since we were together's been a day or two
But, oh my Sweetheart, how I miss you

I'm sure together that we'll be one day
I know that united we'll forever stay

Some day I'm going to be your wife,
I know that we'll have a wonderful life

But, until then we'll just have to cope,
And NEVER, EVER lose our hope





[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-15-2002 11:20 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-15 11:19 PM


Ethel,

I can feel the longing in this write. Will you have to be apart for very long? I liked this very much.

                    Dawn

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2 posted 2002-10-15 11:19 PM


I like this so much Ethel. Never give up hope girl.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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3 posted 2002-10-15 11:24 PM


Dawn, thanks for your reply. I hope not. Every day seems like at least a year or more, though.


  
   Love To All,
   Ethel.....garysgirl

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4 posted 2002-10-15 11:26 PM


Julie, thanks for stopping by. No, we love each other too much to ever give up hope. Thank you for your reply.
Love To All,
Ethel

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5 posted 2002-10-15 11:38 PM


garysgirl - I can feel you reaching out. Keep the faith, as it seems you have, and it will happen...

BC

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6 posted 2002-10-15 11:43 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, my heart goes out to you for I know just how you feel! Me and Joanna live 2000 miles apart and I can't help but cry a lot because she is always in my dreams and thoughts and I want her more than anything! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-10-16 12:20 PM


Bill, thanks so much for stopping by and leaving me a reply. You have a very kind, loving heart. I appreciate your poetry very much.

Love To All,
Ethel

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8 posted 2002-10-16 12:24 PM


Noah, thank you for your sweet, heartfelt reply. I know that you and your Joanna are very much "in love"....just as my Gary and I are. You know there is a big difference in just "loving" someone and in being "in love" with someone. Thanks so much for sharing your poems, too.

With Love To All,
Ethel

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9 posted 2002-10-16 10:27 AM


I remember days such as these
and the daze when I was pleased
to be within the arms of him
but now they've grown quite awf'ly dim.

I hope that you, who's garysgirl
will never face the awful whirl
of watching love and fading hope
be a state of which you'll have to cope.

Keep writing of your love and life
believing, true, you'll be husband and wife.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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10 posted 2002-10-16 10:50 AM


Ethel, this is beautiful, but sad also. I hope you and the love of your life can one be together. Don't ever lose your hope.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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11 posted 2002-10-16 10:52 AM


Ethel, I am so happy that you are in love with the man you love---and that your man not only loves you, but he's in love with you as well! Sounds perfect---except for the distance and timing problems you seem to be experiencing---these will be resolved!--True love always wins out in the end!

~ Keep the faith and keep the home fires burning! ~

Linda

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12 posted 2002-10-16 08:22 PM


Virginia....thanks  SOOO  much for the beautiful poem. I love it when you sweet poets answer each other with poetry. Thanks for the sweet thoughts you had, too.
Love To All,
Ethel

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13 posted 2002-10-16 08:24 PM


Marti...thanks so much for reading my poem and for your sweet words of encouragement. I appreciate it very much.

Love To All,
Ethel

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14 posted 2002-10-16 08:26 PM


Linda...thanks so much for your sweet, kind words. I plan to do just that. Thanks, sweet friend.

Love To All,
Ethel

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