A heartfelt rant by a dreamer

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GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

0 posted 2002-10-15 10:25 PM

my soul is a candle in
twilight.

I am looking at my reflection.
I see clouds of blue smiling
upside-down
frowning
Two twirling, floating suns hide and refract
hurling hurricanes in reverse.

Proclaimation emancipation
Binds the mightiest.

Nature can
Quill exquisite expositions gracefully
while Undoing tight, innumerable shackles effortlessly.
Her reflection lingers in superlative mirages, translated in shivers of
chills,  mystical measures
For my soul alone.
However the tone,
(Inspiration to and fro) in
pensive relapses I
cannot deny
the reality of an absolute
Flame.

A sense of plenary is necessary, as is
the ineludible
Velocity towards love
and sublime
Articulations in peace;
Unspeakable.
This singing is a refrain, though ineffable,
attempted through time and
Trust.
Truth
tragically propels arrows and
shatters lack, smacking into this
plaque proclaiming an (analogy)
elaborate fallacy regarding
the passionate moon and loving sun somehow
Getting a divorce. ( hah)

hence ...

Love is
Cosmic.

The Clarity conscious amended
Whatever severed discrepancies wedged
between us, perceived
as a subtle, indiscriminate intermission in our
Communion.
Therefore-
I am.
Far punier fears squashed god and
Country,
So maybe (yes)
Love can overthrow
The tyranny of
An irrational rationality-labeled
McDonaldization
and set
in motion
A decree!  : pointing to a rubric:
To allow one’s self
To be swallowed by reveries and moods
In falling snow;
Unsubdued elations when flowers bloom, or
Overtures of crickets chirping in tandem; whereupon
Divinity manifests.

Abandon your fears!
Follow the dare
To live wholly!
For we ARE blessed; our lives are
conceived blissfully in Eternity.
If only an elixir could be converted into
verses to recede the tide of fallacies!
Love, dearly and unconditional, is an Aura
whereby assurance abounds limitless

in fine moments by way of dreams that pool
and segue seldom into eternal

Faith.

[This message has been edited by GOlDsparklESS (10-17-2002 09:25 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-15 10:26 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

2 posted 2002-10-21 09:07 PM

Thanks for enjoying this uhm abstract randomness~!

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2002-10-30 10:31 AM

this is a well penned write about something you care very deeply about, my little angel. i am astounded by your use of words. big words here.. big thoughts, grand visions we have here.. yes.

visions

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-10-30 11:30 AM

"To allow one’s self
To be swallowed by reveries and moods
In falling snow;
Unsubdued elations when flowers bloom, or
Overtures of crickets chirping in tandem; whereupon
Divinity manifests."
This just caught my attention, as it is snowing at this very moment, while I am suspended in reverie, and for some reason am hearing crickets chirping.

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