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On Fire With You
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On Fire With You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“ON FIRE WITH YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Sometimes when I walk through the garden of flowers I'm caressed by your fragrance… I’m touched by the remembrance of your lips that have melted with mine reminding me of soft rose petals reaching out to the suns rays warming an early summer morning… They are delicate like your closeness when you press against me, and I feel as if I'm on fire with you.... ~~~~ |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i like the premise of a garden. i am tempted to suggest adding something around the touch of thorns, very few relationship is without them. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this a lot Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BC...save the thorns for another day.... For now...this is quite fine... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
 *turning on the fans* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh wow!! Very very sensual Bill... Much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill Soft and sensory on the warm side. Enjoyed! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Air conditioning is required for reading this one, Bill... Its beautifully sensuous  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Holy moly, call the fire department. This is burning red hot! Sizzling with emotion in this one BC. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Bill, A very sensual write. Dawn |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I know this flame ever so well and I wish for it to always burn brightly in your heart, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is so beautifully written....and with such passion. I know this feeling with my Gary. And, it is WONDERFUL!!! Thanks for sharing your feelings. With Love To All, Ethel |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Bill ... both sensual and delicate. A pleasing combination. Well done. Bob |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Alrighty then....call the fire department!  These flames are just to much!  Wonderful words Bill! ~Sheri |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This poem kindles passion...conjures up memories of kisses... lips melting and bodies pressing...a warm glow surrounded my heart after I read this...thank you Bill. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bill, I'm not used to temperatures this HOT! ---I'm beginning to melt! Earth Angel |
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