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someonespecial Junior Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 10 |
The chill in the air of morning heightens the thrill of a new day. The warmth of words that comfort take me into a peaceful sleep. Walking away from yesterday I've come to a place of understanding, And wear your words close to my heart. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It takes someone special to write like this. My favorite lines are---all of them! EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is very nice. A soft, yet sad write. Enjoyed. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The chill in the air of morning heightens the thrill of a new day. The cooling air of evening Darkness with chill is coming our way The warmth of words that comfort take me into a peaceful sleep. . The day talks are always too short Time spent for memories to keep. Walking away from yesterday I've come to a place of understanding, . Talk of tomorrow all today Full of wild ideas and careful planning. And wear your words close to my heart. . With those words your dreaming will start. Gloom Couldn't resist completing your half a sonnet, Hpe you don't mind |
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someonespecial Junior Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 10 |
EA and White Rose I am glad you enjoyed these simple words. Gloom, it's a welcoming thought to know that someone can complete the incomplete. Thank You ss |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may love always wear your heart so well and comfort you with the gifts of life, this is fabulous, you truly are someone special to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-15-2002 05:36 PM).] |
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