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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon

0 posted 2002-10-15 10:44 AM



1

stars twinkle, owls swoop
leaves rustle, breezes sweep in
mice scamper neath glades

2

moonshine lights up  frost
grasses glisten in silence
symphony of light

3

limbs edged in silver
span a breadth of earth’s surface
shadowing the land

©October 15, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-10-15 11:10 AM


I love this time of year, Virginia.
Nicely done
M

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-10-15 11:14 AM


This is beautiful Vas. I too am quite fond of this time of year. A lovely write.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
3 posted 2002-10-15 11:16 AM


Virginia, this was fantastic.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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4 posted 2002-10-15 03:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, I love the beautiful words you paint of night, this sparkles like diamonds, yay, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
5 posted 2002-10-15 04:19 PM


Beautiful Vas.....enjoyed these haikus a lot

Charisma

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6 posted 2002-10-15 04:20 PM


Nicely done

Cold hands means a warm heart

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