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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-10-15 09:03 AM




I have walked
beside you
on lonely shores
and listened to
Songs of quiet longing
waves in the distanceā€¦.

I am the silence
between your breaths

Brilliant, melting sun
on shimmering sea
Creativity, struggling
For a glimpse of beauty

I am a cool breath
Of your softly flowing thoughts

When you are alone
In the echoes of stillness
void of love in a blackhole

I am the soft music
refreshing your soul

I am the flowers
of your delicate brush strokes
on the pallet of dream

Listenā€¦..
I have always been near
The heartbeat of your soul
A star guiding your destiny
I am your shadow

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-10-15 09:06 AM


AH!  Beautifully penned Cher!
Much enjoyed the read this morning.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-10-15 09:25 AM


I am the silence
between your breaths

A poem that takes the breath away. It's lovely Cher, simply lovely.

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-10-15 09:30 AM


Cheryl, a very good poem to start the day with. Thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

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Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-10-15 10:03 AM


Ohhh! This is good! Very, very good!

Linda

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5 posted 2002-10-15 11:14 AM


Lovely  thoughts, Cheryl...very calming for me today.

M

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6 posted 2002-10-15 05:32 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may love always be the shooting star beaming across your eyes and in your dreams, this is precious, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-10-15 05:45 PM


Cher,  this is awesome....if only we all had
a shadow as lovely as this one...

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