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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Salmon skies surround as fenceless free Eyes rome the dome of heaven fair, Yet such beauty pales and melts As pasty snow kissed by the Sun's Sultry mouth when compared to the Land, Clad in robes of gold and green, Her curves roll and call, Sensual visual ecstasy. And in the north the mountains rise, Tipped, instead of red, a succulent white, While southward bare, lies the desert shaved, Aching for the gentle caress of the wind Or the light touch of rain, Strangley humid barren base. So is the land fair whence I came, Birthed of hollowed cavern, echoing cave; My bones the rock of earth delved deep, My flesh the dirt of shallow ground, My breath the mountain air, and, My blood the desert rain. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Manju, I think this is a very well written poem. You painted a picture very well. thanks for sharing. With love To All, Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice imagery... and I enjoyed the read... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
My dear friend, this is lovely. Beautifully descriptive and written as only you could write it. I enjoyed this very much. And  Welcome To Passions |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is absolutely majestic! EA |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lovely! ~Tier  "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
You know what dear sweet friend. Just cause I know how annoying you find this *bumping* thingy, I'm gonna do it gently I promise. *soft bump* Now see, that didn't hurt at all. Read through this again, and I have to tell you it really is exquisite. You know, whenever I read your poetry I always feel   and look, there's that annoying HuG again too. |
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Quantum Poet New Member
since 2002-10-13
Posts 6 |
Impressive poem. I loved it. Vivid imagery that does what a poem should, stir the emotions. Bravo! Arlindo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Zaheer, I just love this, sweet friend, you always paint marvelous imagery with your words, I saw the salmon skies and your passion raining all throughout this, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Zaheer, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-15-2002 03:50 PM).] |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
wow. thanks all for reading. i guess people do read me! thanks rose. many hugs to you. ---------- 1 q. though. noah - how do you know my name? |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Your name is shown underneath your poem. If you filled that out on the form, then it will appear there. It is a fine name, one that is unique and rolls off the tongue.  But that is why, since ya did ask. |
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