elegant dancing shimmers of light reflect from shinny worn remains of less than ballerinas and more spare change rattles like drums beating out rhythms echoing from empty auditorium seats cob web paradise where light shimmers such as shaman dancing to aboriginal drum beats mix into a subversive subcultural ballet melody drifting through cool night air humid and steamy flamingly abstract notes whisper angel soft like young punks terrorizing old ladies with less memories of today then yesterday ballet dance old lady dance
[This message has been edited by Effigy (10-15-2002 12:25 AM).]
amazing images strewn through this...I hope you don't mind, but it's almost like words have been tossed into a blender with dancing on their mind, and what has come about is what one would see when the blender is at its spin
a concoction that is mesmerizing, captivating, but not easily understood, perceived
Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.
This is really good. I like this. I agree with the statement above. It's as if the words were thrown in a blender and came out dancing. The first read through is a little overwhelming, but that's not a critique. That's just a statement, and it can be good or bad. The only negative thing I have to say is that you mispelled "shiny".