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Twenty-Four Dawns
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Twenty-Four Dawns |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
TWENTY-FOUR DAWNS I'm not asking for some deep, spiritual awakening, I'm not asking for a resurrection, all I want tonight is that someone wrapped around me warm and tight like grandmother's quilt, I'll be the piece of candy she used to hide inside, all I want tonight is to share pillow whispers, and together, see, know, feel, a new dawn in twenty-four time zones |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a very beautiful write.  Dawn |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
But what would such sated comfort be if not a spiritual resurrection of sorts? It's what we all eventually want.......the whole blessed package. Enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
See my reply below. I had written one in this box but then my computer went kaplooey and I thought this reply (which I have since deleted) had disappeared into cyberspace! So I posted the one below. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-15-2002 02:33 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I understand how you feel, I have been there myself. Amazing thing is that, as I became more spiritually enlightened I began to feel warm and cozy when I went to bed at night. It is as if I am wrapped up in a blanket of love---so safe and protected. I hope you find this for yourself as well. ~ sending you a little hug ~ Earth Angel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Quantum Poet New Member
since 2002-10-13
Posts 6 |
LIked the poem. Left me smiling to no-one in particular. Thanks for the enjoyable read... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so well and I wish for this love to come to your heart and touch you spiritually and emotionally to eternity! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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parker2k New Member
since 2002-10-15
Posts 3 |
great poem and very moving as the words are close to my own heart. Ian -x- |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Ahhhh... great write. Loved it! |
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