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0 posted 2002-10-14 09:36 PM


Four angels flew into the sky
On flights of golden wings
To crash into the earth
and never fly again

Two to the ground and two to the sky
one trip to heaven
to return to their god
the angels will not fly again

The saddness that bloomed
was absolute
When we heard about the tragety
And that the angels would never fly again

See if you can guess the meaning too this poem

[This message has been edited by Wind (10-14-2002 09:50 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-14 10:31 PM


Beautiful poem. I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-10-14 11:07 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) I'm not 100% sure, but are the four angels metaphors for airplanes holding many people, in which two (the sky) crashed in the World Trade Center on September 11th and the other two ones which were foiled and crashed to the ground in the Pentagon and in Pennsylvania? (big hugggsssssss) This is very well-expressed, sweet friend, may all the victims now rest safely in His embrace as angels guiding us all with love and strength, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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