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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2002-10-14 07:05 PM

the wind did not listen
it flew away with my memory
leaving dust-covered scraps
of oblivion in the shell
of its infinity
all the yesterdays are gone
and tommorrow is too close
wait for me......

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The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-10-14 07:16 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Eric, this is so hauntingly sad, sweet friend, I hope all is alright and now today great bliss swirls all around you as tomorrow I'm sure will offer much blessings to you! (sigh) Count your many blessings, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-10-14 07:47 PM

everything's fine Noah and thanks for the expression of concern I appreciate it very much.
Just a little artistic road out of the past that I went down again.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-10-14 10:17 PM

ethome - I truly understand the road of the past to travel... Nice write...

BC

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2002-10-15 03:32 PM

Seems we are destined to go down this road much too often. We need some road blocks placed strategically I think.

A very poignant piece.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-10-15 03:36 PM

yes nicely done... some roads traveled stay etched in our minds forever..

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-10-15 03:38 PM

Eric, I like your poem, though it has a twinge of sadness. Try to think of the good memories that make you happy. Okay? (I know it's really hard at times to keep the sad memories out of our heads). Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-15-2002 03:40 PM).]

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

7 posted 2002-10-15 04:33 PM

Eric, it's been a while since I have read your words, its good to read your poetry again. Wonderfully written.

El riesgo vive siempre!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-10-15 07:07 PM

Eric

Emotive and real...a feeling well worded. Different style for you...much enjoyed!

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