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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-10-14 04:58 PM

She Sang

He stroked, absolute, the right emotion
and thereafter dwelt in her such commotion
that no longer the thrumming of the ocean
could match her outpour of devotion ~

~ and she sang ~

O profound was this reverberation,
met it, she did, with quickened celebration,
had you taken heed, heard the ring, Cause for ovation!
As it stood in time with His ultimate creation

when she sang.

Ne’ermore then, shall passion dwell
in quietness, for thereby its swell
shall increase through sweet, harmonious belle
and chime forth, their love to tell

in her song.

~*~

Revised repost from 10/00

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-10-14 05:06 PM

You sang her song so well!

EA

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2002-10-14 05:10 PM

Well that was lovely - but what were you listening to?

Had to be Celine Dion

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-10-14 05:35 PM

"Ne’ermore then, shall passion dwell
in quietness, for thereby its swell
shall increase through sweet, harmonious belle
and chime forth, their love to tell

in her song.

(smiles) Yay!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, it is amazing how beautiful a song one can croon when love consumes ones heart and changes ones life around, this is splendid, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-14-2002 05:36 PM).]

Elizabeth

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Posts 6871
Minnesota

4 posted 2002-10-14 05:40 PM

I'm saving this one. This is beautiful, Karilea.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

5 posted 2002-10-14 06:22 PM

With the voice of a Kansas meadowlark,
she sings her song of love,
Not with the words of mortals,
but odes from high above,
she sings the song of muses fair,
she sings her song sublime,
this poetess from the Kansas plains,
who gifts us with her rhyme.

btw, enjoyed the poem.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-10-14 07:51 PM

And you m'dear sing like a nightingale.
Beautifully expressed Karilea.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2002-10-14 07:56 PM

Oh Karilea, how do you manage to keep coming up with such beautiful pieces time and time again. Must be something in the air in Kansas or all that wheat! This is just unbelievable.

A keeper for my notebook.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

8 posted 2002-10-14 08:08 PM

A beautiful, melodic piece that swells upon the soul in endless notes of sweet harmony. A wonderfully crafted poem that should live on as a classic. ***Ivy Rose

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

9 posted 2002-10-14 08:18 PM

Karilea,
You sing of love so well,
Of which song I hope you tell.

Lovely piece.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Denise

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10 posted 2002-10-14 08:32 PM

Very beautiful, Karilea! Lovely!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-10-14 08:47 PM

Lovely Sunshine...James

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2002-11-12 03:19 AM

~and a poet sang~

This is absolutely beautiful, Karilea.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-12-2002 03:20 AM).]

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-11-12 09:29 AM

Such an outpouring of beautiful notes,
of the cooing white dove....as she sings
and flies, soaring high...

Good Morning Kansas...

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