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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-14 03:44 PM



It is midafternoon when the day
is breathing a sigh, for escape
from bustle of morn.

Adorned with sun now slipping,
shadows long gone, there is
a pale shade to all of life.

The houses across the way
in faded show, light spray.
Slight of the bright
they display in morning glare.

The tone, soft around meet
of plane to air, corner of wood,
now a bit undefined, in mid-
afternoon luminance.

It is a different kind of calm
than felt through night's window.
This is a moment only, of quiet,
before the din of rush hour flow.

People then, will take their place
upon landscape through pane viewed
muted some by the grey of day
in late afternoon of mood.

Alas, then the vision will be lost,
of time just standing still.

WhiteRose 10/14/02

"The first rule of poetry, write what you know."

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-14 03:47 PM


I love how you do this! You bring me right into your garden of thoughts and visions!

Another winner!

EA

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-10-14 03:53 PM


Thanks Linda, Your comments are always so nice. I'm glad you enjoyed. It is a lovely mindafternoon here in SC.
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3 posted 2002-10-14 07:27 PM




(smiles) Oh Anne, I just love how you describe everything with your golden heart, sweet friend, the afternoon is such a relaxing and tranquil time and in the summer it is good just to relax outside in a beach chair or play badminton or tennis or so much more! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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4 posted 2002-10-15 08:26 PM


Thank you Noah, for the sweet response.
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