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Tim
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0 posted 2002-10-14 12:08 PM



Within my angry protestations,
...lays a plea of desperation,
Screaming out unto the night,
...searching, seeking of the light,
Countless signs to guide the way,
...so many paths from which to stray,
Knowing not if day is done,
...in shadows of a dying sun,
I walk alone as I traverse,
...upon stone walk, to seek asperse,
Footsteps lead in paths unbending,
...twisting, curving trails unending,
Unbroken silence of the night,
...waveless, tideless Luna's light,
Brooding over all living things,
...hushing even cicada's wings,
In echo of night's silent spasm,
...I walk alone into night's chasm.

© Copyright 2002 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-10-14 12:13 PM


Tim,
Don't we all, enjoyed the read.

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-10-14 12:14 PM


Enjoyed the read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2002-10-14 12:15 PM


With your poetry, you offer so much variety to the reader. This of course, is not one of your soft, gentle, feel good ones---but it is riveting and powerful!

EA

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2002-10-14 12:15 PM



No, no, with this writing, you take
us with you.  Isn't it nice to have a day
where you can sit back, and reflect a bit
on all that is before you, and how, by the
mere flick of ink, you can change the currents
of so many...

like us.

Thank you, Sir...

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2002-10-14 12:16 PM


yes...like us.

thanks again.

Denise
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6 posted 2002-10-14 08:43 PM


Never stop musing, Tim! The results are always wonderful!
regards2you
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California
7 posted 2002-10-14 10:55 PM


This is so remarkably powerful, it took my breath away! Thank you so much to help me know how I was feeling.
Quite a gift you have. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

With Warm Regards,

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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