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Your Eyes
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Your Eyes A look of deep love I see sparkling green eyes Everytime I look at you. ...believe what your heart feels..... [This message has been edited by scorpio (10-14-2002 03:05 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
There's nothing like that look is there?  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Falling into depths deeper the dark seas become a horizon's view |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
tears reflect Eden falling down a lovers cheeks with one gentle touch  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love your gorgeous words, I am a fan of them, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
My eyes are green, Surrounded by red, Don't remember, Going to bed. Interesting write... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My eyes of dark green Sparkle with delight and love ~ When I hear your voice. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh yes, the eyes! A peek into the soul of the one you love! ~Sheri |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Darnation! My eyes are blue! EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Scorpio, if you ARE going for a Senryu, drop "in your" in the second line and your syllable count will be spot on! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
my eyes fill with tears brought on by your love for me droplets from green pools Well done scorpio!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, I loved this. I see all kinds of things in my Gary's eyes. He says he sees lots of things in my green eyes, too. Thanks for sharing this. With Love To All, Ethel....garysgirl |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you for your replies...I do appreciate you reading and commenting on my words... and I did make the changes that Sunshine suggested...Thank you Karilea... Enchantess I can see the sparkle in your eyes...from here... ...believe what your heart feels..... |
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