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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-10-14 09:23 AM


I love Mondays,
yes I do.
He's back at work--
the kids? In school.

Joni Mitchell sings the song--
LOUD--and I can sing along
sitting in my underwear
and dancing for the no one there.

You can have the holidays...
I'll celebrate the moon's namesake...
Moon-day-Monday--just for me--
I'll save Saturday for sleep!

*   *    *

for stay-at-home moms everywhere...er, anywhere? Any of those left?

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-10-14 09:32 AM


YES!!  I love this!!
I remember when the kids were in school
I really did look forward to quiet times
come Monday morning...
This brought back wonderful feelings!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-10-14 09:37 AM


smiling....cautiously grateful--it's a good day to be ME!!!

(knock wood)

regards2you
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3 posted 2002-10-14 09:53 AM


I like this. You captured a tiny
part of living that every stay at home parent experiences, I'll bet. My daughter will adore this. She does value those Monday mornings. This is poem is true.

Makes me grin.
Pat  

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        "Desiderata"

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4 posted 2002-10-14 10:01 AM


I refuse to reply to this poem on the grounds that it could incriminate mothyme.

ROFLMAO

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5 posted 2002-10-14 10:32 AM


The moon always shines brighter on Monday night.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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6 posted 2002-10-15 01:57 PM


Oooooh ... sheesh. For some reason I thought Monday had something to do with Mars ... no, Mikey, that's MARCH. :p

May you have many march-filled moondays.

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7 posted 2002-10-15 02:16 PM


Serenity, this was really cute. I'll bet you like getting back to PIP more regularly, too, don't you? thanks again for sharing yourself.
With love To All,
Ethel/garysgirl

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8 posted 2002-10-15 02:40 PM


awe-mazing..as always.
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9 posted 2002-10-15 05:01 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too love these days though I have to go to college and enjoy staying up playing guitar and writing to myself! (big hugggssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2002-10-15 07:16 PM


This was written before my coffee, but in a genuine state of bliss...and apparently? groan that was my last "alone" day until...you guessed it NEXT Monday!!!

thanks all...I knew you could relate...I find I am lonelier in a crowd sometimes than I am when I'm alone...

Hugs all with gratitude.

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