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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-10-14 07:20 AM


Abandon

Walking with the odor of flowers
Feeling all the warmth of the sun
Absorbing the play of its power
Till the time of my walk is done

Umbrella by a sky full of clouds
Painted yellow auburn dare
Speaking fantasies aloud
Calling me to play if I care.

And my heart took off in flair
With illusions wings of flight
And I flew but I knew not where
But flew towards the stars of the night.

And they’re in a silvered moon light glen
With phantom fantasies in store
Waited each piece of figments yen
To wrap me in a web of awe

And I abandoned to the enzyme
And osmosed in this moment’s time



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1 posted 2002-10-14 07:22 AM



In those last two lines...
I hear the sizzle...

smiling here, Sy!  Have a cup with me?

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2 posted 2002-10-14 08:08 AM


"And I abandoned to the enzyme
And osmosed in this moment’s time"




(smiles) Wow, I love the whole poem but the end really stuck out at me, this is one diagnosis of a delightful morning read, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-10-14 08:20 AM


Good Morning, Mr. T.! ~

It is always a pleasure to start my day off with a warm cup of T !

As I read the fruits of your busy pen, I am "absorbing the play of its power"...

My imagination is stimulated and freed to explore the limits of the universe without "Abandon"!

~ May you forever sail the seas of blue ~

EA

Nan
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4 posted 2002-10-14 08:25 AM


Dearest Sy - You have the MOST wondrous of minds - It travels to the most exotic places we could possibly imagine...
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2002-10-14 08:51 AM


Ahhhh Sy .... echoing dear Nan above. You do indeed have a beautiful mind. This was lovely.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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6 posted 2002-10-14 09:03 AM


Good morning Sy:  My tea tastes so much better now that I have had my fill of your magnificent morning write.

Enjoy your day....Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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7 posted 2002-10-14 09:04 AM


Sy, this is a beautiful morning read...
More tea?
~Warm morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2002-10-14 09:54 AM


I swear sometimes it's hard to read your poetry, what with all that sparkling fairy dust flying around!

and sometimes I even hear little tinkles of glass chime...

mornin' sy... Lovely place you have here!

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9 posted 2002-10-14 09:57 AM


Umbrella by a sky full of clouds
Painted yellow auburn dare
==================================
And my heart took off in flair
With illusions wings of flight
And I flew but I knew not where
But flew towards the stars of the night.

And they're in a silvered moon light glen
With phantom fantasies in store
Waited each piece of figments yen
To wrap me in a web of awe

And I abandoned to the enzyme
And osmosed in this moment's time

=====================================

Umbrella by a sky full of clouds
Painted yellow auburn dare



Stinkylove...you wrap us all in a web of awe with your wonderous rhymes and imagery swept poetry....
your poetic osmosis is my metered mitosis

*ww*


Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining.

John O'Donohue
Conamara Blues

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10 posted 2002-10-14 09:59 AM


Fantastic flight of fancy Sir. Enjoyed
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11 posted 2002-10-14 10:34 AM


Seymour - Thankyou for this smiling morning read. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

regards2you
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12 posted 2002-10-14 10:35 AM


In the last two lines  I experienced a ~soundless slide into 'bliss'~.

Thank you for taking us with you.

Enjoyed this much.

Warmly

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2002-10-14 12:10 PM


Sunshine,
Thank you I will.

Noah,
Thank you for the WOW.

Earth Angel,
Thank you so much.

Nan,
Thank you my love.

Kit,
Thank you for the lovely.

Marti,
Thank you for the hugs and hugs back

Enchantress,
Thank you dear and hugs back.

Serenity,
You are a doll, enjoy the tinkles.

JM,
LOL sweet comment. Worked on my Email today,
I think you can use the new Email address now. I will send you a letter sometime today
WWRS

RSWells,
Thank you for the read and enjoy.

Chris,
You welcome and thank you.

regards2you,
Beautiful comment, thank you.

vlraynes
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14 posted 2002-10-19 03:33 AM



Sy~
I have to echo so many others here...this is truly beautiful.
You have such a wonderful gift with words, my friend.
I absolutely love this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-10-19 07:34 AM


Vicky,
Thank you so much for the read like and bump.

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