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Squiggles, squirms, yet not walk
Sweet baby breath, cannot talk.
Squeaks and squeals, droll on chin.
Wiggles and giggles, clap of hands.

Pampered and puffed, oh so clean.
Open mouth kisses,  not serene!
Bounces dimpled legs they thrash.
Shrieks and screams, oh boy, at
                             last!

Shock of red hair, temper flair,
Wants to get out of the rocking
                             chair.
Calm of sleepiness, it is gone.
Behaves like this for only one.


Squirm get down from mothers care.
Rejoice!!! My ~Nana~ is over there.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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I absolutely adore this poem! Delightfully delicious! I love babies so much!

Well done! Enjoyed emensely!

EA
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Pat, this is so good, as is all your work. I love poems about babies, too. And I liked the ending where the baby wanted to get to its Grandmother. Real Cute!


Love To All,
Ethel.....garysgirl

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-14-2002 11:14 PM).]

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This is very pretty...
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Linda, coming from you that means so much; am glad you like this. Warm hugs to you.


Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Ethel and Kelly, thanks....and he is just all that cute! and loves me all that much....and life doesn't get better than that.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Regards2you,

This is a totally adorable poem. Thanks for putting a smile on my face tonight.

                            Dawn
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(giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo adorable, sweet friend, and may you and Nana share many special memories together of true family love! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile widely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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just adorable!
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OhPat~
I hadn't seen this one before~
How adoringly done ... you are such a great ~Nana~ and I know just how much you do for those little ones~

How blessed our lives with our grands-of-children~
*Huglets* ALWAYS
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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