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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2002-10-13 04:51 PM



I got your MSN the other day
I clicked you on, then answered in my unsuspecting way
At first you seemed alright with me
But soon my eyes began to see
that you had something waiting there to say
So, I backed off and let you fire away!

You said I didn't give you enough time
And though I'd moved across the sea, the hours I should find
to be there even though your day
was late at night for me,
but hey
Your expectations just weren't being met
With all your problems, how could I forget?

You told me you had put me on your list
of friends who weren't devoted, therefore I would not be missed
Well, all I have to say is "Thanks"
for putting me within their ranks
And now I think it's YOU who should be told:
I don't need friends who run first hot, then cold???

* * *

There's a reason behind this writing, and I will let the reader draw his/her own conclusions. Sometimes it's necessary to write about life's experiences, just because it alleviates the pain.

© Copyright 2002 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-13 04:57 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sunnyone, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I can't understand how some people can be so cruel to ones own friends, for I know for one you are a friend who will always be on my hearts MSN list and you have a golden heart that deserves to be respected! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, thank you so much for sharing this as this is so important, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
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2 posted 2002-10-13 04:57 PM


You are absolutely right writing is wonderful therepy.

Enjoyed your poem.

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

vandana
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3 posted 2002-10-13 04:59 PM


enjoyed
Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-10-13 05:04 PM


Sunny - good to see you, and a strong write...

BC

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2002-10-13 05:09 PM


Noah....
You know, I sincerely appreciate my good friends like you, and the many that I have found here at Passions.  Even in the best of families, there will be those who don't see eye to eye, and for that I am sad, but I cherish your friendship, and your always sweet reply!!!

Pat....
So nice to meet you, and yes....I have always believed that writing includes all aspects of living. Not every piece can be full of love, because every day isn't always either.  If one is able to pen how they truly feel, then they can heal....and thank you much!!

Vandana....
Always so good to see you, my friend, and I do thank you, too!!

Sunnyone
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6 posted 2002-10-13 05:11 PM


Thank you Bill, and sometimes strong situations require a little extra strength to clean them up!!
Music Maker
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7 posted 2002-10-13 05:17 PM


You just have to move along on life's highway, Darling - just put it down as yet another bad experience, and walk on without looking back.   Nice one - Love from your Hubby XX
Congratulations on being with me here in England now for exactly a year today - and thank you for making me so very happy and content - Here's to the next ones.  XXX

Sunnyone
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8 posted 2002-10-13 05:22 PM


Hello my Music Maker!
Thank you so much for your support and love, and this has been the most wonderful year of my entire life!  Yes....onward and upward we go, Darling, never looking back!!  

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2002-10-13 05:36 PM


A wonderful write to purge those feelings Sunyonne.  Sometimes we have to write and also, we have to do what we must in life to be happy and a true friend will always be happy for you even when it means that they cant share you as much as they once did....geez.......I hope that made sense.  Hugs to you.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Sunnyone
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10 posted 2002-10-13 06:00 PM


Hi Gentle Spirit, and yes....that makes such perfect sense.  That's what real friends do, I always thought.  Thank you, too!!!!
nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2002-10-13 06:14 PM


I have  always said to those friends in real who use to say why don't you call or contact me or that saying the phone works both ways...I say  be happy when you meet each other after time passes or speak to one another... everyone has a busy life today...and so when I haven't seen someone in years I don't ask why they haven't kept in touch, I am  just grateful to see them once again...a very thoughtful piece, Sunnyone.

hugssss and good wishes
oh..and a happy one year anniversary for you both
Maureen

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-13-2002 06:16 PM).]

Sunnyone
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12 posted 2002-10-13 06:20 PM


Yes, Maureen.....that is it exactly!!!
I've most enjoyed the friendships that are relaxed, where you know that the person will be your friend, and stay that way, no matter where you are or what may happen to either of you. Yes, thankyou for your reply, as it was a pleasure to think about!!


Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (10-13-2002 06:20 PM).]

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