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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Waiting My hands are out in patient wait In places of anticipate Yet phantoms of the building task Are passing up my hands of ask. They are the magic mist of seem Extrapolating every dream Turning some reality Into wiles finality And though I bow to there exist They pass me by in resist And will not take me by the hand And this I do not understand I offered up my treasure trove For them to make a gardens grove But they have closed the door on me And cast me out on Midnights Sea. And though the diamond stars are bright They are too far for Eden’s light. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But your muse stands in good stead and lets the rhymes leave that good head... Good morning, Sy... lifting my cup to you, Sir!  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Guess that is why it is so important to know who we are and just exactly who does hold the keys to happiness, something that took me decades to find. Now, all else for me is simply if it is God's will. Acceptance is a wonderful place to be, as is surrender.  As Ever, enjoy your work. Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! ~ You offer daily your treasure troves And here at PIP your garden grows Not lost or cast upon Midnight Sea But in full bloom for all to see EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
And additionally, it is in the blatant *"deliciousness" of the effort and joy of creating not the failure of result that makes every difference, isn't it? Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (10-13-2002 11:06 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Only you could start this day so wisely ... 'Extrapolating every dream' Ya' know ... that's a WOWSER-WORD !!!  Wonderful~ Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Love this and your use of words that make my eyes open wide so early. Wonderful Sunday morning read love. ~Morning Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - I raise my cup of tea to you this fine Sunday morn. Enjoyed this read. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy....make sure you are wearing your life jacket before you get cast out on those midnight seas.... Another quality piece of your daily fare....thanx.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I hope so.  Pat, What you say is true, thank you. Earth Angel, Very sweet comment, thank you. Marge, Love and hugs back.  Enchantress, Have a good one. Chris, Enjoy your tea and thank you. Magnus, That is a good idea Thanx Vandana, Yhank you dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dear Stinky...got your email yesterday... I wrote you back lastnight to both email address(old and new)...dont know if you got them..it seems your new email address isnt working...but the note you sent me came from your old email. just wanted to let you know in case something is not getting thru since yesterday.  Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. John O'Donohue Conamara Blues [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (10-13-2002 01:57 PM).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful!! Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your wonderful words always display glimpses of Eden, I love it!!! (sigh) This is miraculous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you for the read and like. I did not get your mail. I don't seem to be registered right. Tomorrow I will call them up and try and get them to walk me through it. When I get it straightened out I'll write again. WWRS  Noah, Still having trouble with my new computer but thank you for the nice comment. Charisma, Thank you for the beautiful. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy~ Once again, I'm in awe of your talent. I never can seem to find the words to properly express how your poetry makes me feel, so I'll simply say that I love it, and it touches me. Hugs to you, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Man, Mr. Seymour...I'm glad somebody bumped this back up here. I don't know how I missed it. I totally enjoyed reading your work, again, kind Sir. Thanks for sharing with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vicky, Sweet of you to bump this up, thank yo so much. garysgirl Thank you, you are a dear. |
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