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Can I Trust You?
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Can I Trust You? |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Can I Trust You? I want to talk to you. Can I trust you? There are so many things I want to say. I'd have to expose my inner self, and, let you see into my soul. Will you maim me with truth I cannot see? Or, laugh at the way I imagine things could be? I want to talk to you. Can I trust you with my feelings? ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Pat~ Only you can answer your question. Like a country song sung by Travis Tritt " Can I Trust You With My Heart " I really like your poem, because the heart is so tender and can be broken so easy...Paul |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Oh this is a question I've asked myself about many a person. I enjoyed this poem a lot. Thanks for sharing. Dawn |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
After a period of proving oneself, may they be trusted to "speak" into your life or listen and not judge....and there are few to choose from any more...I enjoyed this and yep it has me thinkin'...  Cher Poetry is: |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Enjoyed the read Pat. As you trust any other, I am trustworthy Speak to me, as a whisper that breaks the darkness I will not paint the pictures of untruth I am the listener of listeners Be not afraid to be yourself The soul is pure and free I shall not be tormentor Your words I hold with trust A laugh and smile we might share For we are different but sharing time So speak to me Your feelings; forever I shall entrust to friendship Sincerely Rick |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Trust, the first timid step towards Love, the toe in the water, heart in the throat. Bon Chance! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Trust is not something that comes easily, nor should it be given lightly. I've been in this position before and know how hard it is to finally place yourself in the hands of another...but there are those deserving of our trust  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Of course you can little girl,, ya want some candy? Here, come into my bedroom, let me give you some chocolate....you can trust me....really....nice write |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Not easy to open one's heart...so much vulnerability...and yet nothing risked...nothing gained...love is one of life's biggest gambles...insightful write.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Can I trust you?"---and do you have faith in your own judgement, to know when, or if, you can trust him. Listen to your heart. The answer lies within. ~ sending you a warm hug ~ Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Patricia, I can understand the heartfelt yearning in this, sweet friend, trust is what defines love, the anatomy and health of every heart and yes, only you can answer that question and let one know if the other is willing to listen to you! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all wish you the best, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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