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regards2you
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0 posted 2002-10-13 03:55 AM




I like waking up early
and listening to the quiet,
when moonlight's gone
but, dawn is still blanketed
by darkness.

This hour of solitude
is free time,
my very own day.

I can think without distractions
and, start tomorrows plans,
but usually, I don't do that at all
Instead I use
these precious moments
only for me.

The concentration of aloneness
is thick with no responsibility.
I can talk to me and
learn of what I am,
or, what I want to be.

Just me and me,
we share this special time
together and let in no one else.
I use this space so selfishly
and grin at anyone
who says they can't find time alone.

As daybreak beckons me,
I fill up on energy from my soul
and it prepares me for activity
that too often tries to bury me
in other people's dreams.

Yes, this is my time,
the nurturing of only me.



..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (10-13-2002 05:13 AM).]

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DawnG
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1 posted 2002-10-13 03:59 AM


regards2you,

Everyone needs time for nurturing themselves. I wish I knew how to take that time for myself as you have found. When I do get a chance to rise early in the morning, it is a magical time. Thanks for the reminder to make time for myself.

                                  Dawn

regards2you
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2 posted 2002-10-13 04:11 AM


Dawn, You are so right. My daughter says the same thing as you. And she is a stay at home mom. I wrote this when my children were teens and I was a single, working mom, with no help from their father, financially or otherwise, and, had I not done this, I could never have made through such difficult years. I literally did get up early to do just this. Try it sometime. Nurturing  is critically important for ourselves, particularly if you are alone.  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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3 posted 2002-10-13 04:20 AM


regards2you~ I enjoyed this very much.
Thanks for sharing...Paul
Please check your e mail.

regards2you
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4 posted 2002-10-13 04:40 AM


Hey Paul, I did but can't find it.
I'll keep looking. Glad you like this.
Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2002-10-29 12:58 PM


Pat, this is a very good poem...the thoughts..the words...all of it. I went back to read some of the poetry I've missed and I'm so glad I did. I would have hated to have missed this beautiful poem.
Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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