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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-10-13 03:30 AM


In Love
The World
Seems At Peace

My lovely Polynesian sweetheart and me.
Together we sail across the silky blue sea.
Whales and dolphins swim peacefully around
in warm waters of island surround.
A thousand coconut trees and a little grass
shack with tropical flowers, taro and corn
growing in back.
Our baby pig lets out a squeal of delight as
we return to our island on a moonlit night.
In love the world seems at peace as we embrace
and kiss goodnight enjoying the beauty of this island night.

JamesLee
Oct12
2002


© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
DawnG
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1 posted 2002-10-13 03:37 AM


Oh Wow! What an absolutely beautiful poem. I needed a cheer me up tonight and I think you may have done it. Thanks.

                            Dawn

regards2you
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2 posted 2002-10-13 09:28 AM


Lovely....and, I want to go there, but don't need to now. Reading this gave
me an instant,quick little get-away.
Thank you.


Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (10-13-2002 09:27 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-13 05:09 PM




(sigh) Oh James, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy for you both and may each day be a luau of happiness for you both! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2002-10-13 07:29 PM


JamesMichael...Sounds like a tropical paradise for love. Enjoyed this poem very much.  ***Ivy Rose
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2002-10-13 10:46 PM


Sounds mighty fine to me! Yes, indeedy!

That's the stuff of which dreams are made--and you're living it?!?

I love how you bring the islands to me.

EA

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-06-15 03:38 AM


Thank you all for the lovely responses....James
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