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We Look So Good In Love (For My Sweetheart Joanna)
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We Look So Good In Love (For My Sweetheart Joanna) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(For my sweet buttercup Joanna!  ) We Look So Good In Love By: Noah Eaton 10/12/02 Damask your eyes and let me see your secrets Purify your heart and kiss away the saccharine Every word you say I'll always listen Be your bobstay on your ship and help you cross every ocean Come see what's on display deep in my heart, my love Let's gambol and play, my Guinevere The love I see in your eyes have colors so chatoyant The sonic boom of your happy laughter is so flamboyant Through your muses binoculars your love feels so clairvoyant Diagnosing me with your angels kiss pandemic Let me caress your flesh of charlotte russe, my love In the moonlight your face glows in clair de lune, my Guinevere We look so good in love, my sweet lover Every day I want you more than ever And together we'll fly forever I'll be by your side wherever You are my divine answer to every Kyrie The rhythm in every seguidilia and blessing on every journey Your smile is nothing like the sun as it shines beneath In your heart where in the winter it is always spring You snug up to my heart like a chick in a little boys hands Chirping sweet innocent songs across my promisedland We look so good in love, my sweet lover Every day I want you more than ever And together we'll fly forever I'll be by your side wherever Every minute I think of your smile and wanting you Yesterday always seems to pass me by You look so good in love, my dear We'll dance like it's a prom in heaven... Tread softly, love Come here to me Show me your world Caress my heart I will not leave For you, my dear Are my dear Muse My angel of my life... We look so good in love, my sweet lover Every day I want you more than ever And together we'll fly forever I'll be by your side wherever Every minute I think of your smile and wanting you Yesterday always seems to pass me by You look so good in love, my dear We'll dance like it's a prom in heaven... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-12-2002 11:12 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you do look good in love my friend, and you are just that... BC |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Noah...Your writing is what I have missed dearly. You write of love with such pagentry and deep emotion. Passion spills over unto every word, every thought. You do look so good in love, Noah. And, I am happy that you and Joanna have each found the perfect soulmate. ***Ivy Rose |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Noah Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The sweetness of the poem, combined with your awesome vocabulary... make this an unbelievable piece.... Absolutely fantastic, Noah... lovely... beautiful  ~ big hugs smilen at youLyra |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Nothing soars higher or sings more beautifully than a heart in love...and Noah...your heart is definately in love...this is a touching testament of your love and devotion... ...believe what your heart feels..... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Noah...You have blessed us with another masterpiece from your heart. Thank You...Paul I really liked the following verse. We look so good in love, my sweet lover Every day I want you more than ever And together we'll fly forever I'll be by your side wherever [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (10-13-2002 05:21 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ivy Rose said it so well, " You write of love with such pageantry and deep emotion." ~ May your wings forever be lifted up by the winds of love ~ Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww Noah! This is a sweet poem for your Joanna! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, my goodness, love is just rippling down the lines of this poem!! You write so well about feelings deep within your heart. The pic really does look alot like you and Joanna!! lol. So Sweet. hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah, the love you have for Joanna is unbelievable. She is one very lucky girl to have someone like you. I marvel at the depth of your love. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
As I said once before Noah....your command of the English language for one so young is amazing in itself, now coupled with your feelings of love it's overwhelming |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
awwwwwwww, so sweet, love it! SS |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A wonderful proclamation of love. Filled with the sweetness that is you. This is just so very special Noah.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah Your love poems are amazing! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dear sweet Noah....you K-N-O-WWWWWW that I love this!!!! And of corse, I put me and Gary in there when I'm reading it. Thanks again, sweet Noah, for sharing your heart-felt feelings, with us all. |
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