As clouds cross the moon..........(Senryu)

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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-10-12 11:05 PM

~

As clouds cross the moon,
Haunting cries of tortured souls
Echo thru' the nite

~

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-12-2002 11:06 PM).]

Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-10-12 11:10 PM

WOW!! A fantastic Halloween one!

Love this
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-12 11:12 PM

Enchantress~~~

Glad you like my Halloweeny senryu! cackle cackle

EA

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-10-12 11:12 PM

Earth Angel - I hear them my dear, I hear them...

BC

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-12 11:15 PM

BC~~~

That surprises me! I guess I got the impression that all you heard at night were sounds of love! tehe

EA

Mistletoe Angel

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5 posted 2002-10-13 12:19 PM

(wicked laughs) Oooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, yes, let those clouds rule the day and bring on the darkness, ahahahaha! LOL! This is cute in a spooky way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-13 12:44 PM

Noah ~

I see you're in the "spirit" of Halloween!
cackle cackle

~ Also be very careful where you fly on All-Hollow's-Eve ~

Linda

NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2002-10-13 05:13 PM

I couldn't help but smile with your little spooky words!!! Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2002-10-13 05:50 PM

Marti, I thank you!

P.S. Great picture!

~ sending you a happy halloween hug ~

Linda

regards2you
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9 posted 2002-10-13 06:07 PM

This is perfect!

Warmly,
Pat

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"Desiderata"

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2002-10-13 06:15 PM

Pat ~

So was your comment!

~ sending you warm thoughts on a cool night ~

Linda

Wind

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11 posted 2002-10-13 09:14 PM

glad you gave Haiku a try! Witty little poem
Great title

WhiteRose
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12 posted 2002-10-13 09:33 PM

This is great Linda. Perfect for the days of halloween.

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2002-10-13 09:34 PM

Wind ~

Thanx for blowing in! You know how I love the wind!

I enjoy writing haikus, senryus, tankas etc.
Haikus and senryus have the same form but haikus are strictly on nature, altho' the first line of this poem is on nature, it doesn't qualify as a haiku. It is a senryu. Actually these types of poems are not usually given titles. I just key in the first line in the title box for ease in identification.

I am so pleased that you enjoyed this little poem and I look forward to reading more of yours!

~ May your week that lies ahead, be full of wonderful experiences for you! ~

Earth Angel

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2002-10-13 09:38 PM

RoseWhite ~

Good evening dear rose of white! Glad you enjoyed my little bit of Halloweeny poetry!

~ Be wary of things that go "booo" in the night! ~

EA

VAS
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15 posted 2002-10-14 09:53 AM

eerie scene...well done!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2002-10-14 10:13 AM

Good early morning to you, VAS out there in Oregon!

Thanks for dropping by and for your "eerie"
comment!

~Have a great day! It's Thanksgiving Day here in Canada; however, our family always celebrates it on Sunday--ours was wonderful!~

EA

hoot_owl_rn
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17 posted 2002-10-14 10:33 AM

A Senryu fitting for the season

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2002-10-14 11:18 AM

hoot_owl_rn ~

Thanx! That's what I was aiming for!

~ Sending you warm smiles across the miles!~

EA

SmartChick
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19 posted 2002-10-14 10:13 PM

You do these very well. This is great for halloween.

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2002-10-14 10:23 PM

SmartChick ~

Thanks Sue! It was fun coming up with this one for Halloween!

Linda

Gentle Spirit
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21 posted 2002-10-15 11:20 AM

Poignant but lovely. Well done.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2002-10-15 11:28 AM

Donna ~

Aloft in winds 'cross darkened skies
--moans and groans and shrieks and cries!

~ Happy Halloweeny! ~

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