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0 posted 2002-10-12 07:09 PM



                    

            ~~~~~~~~~~
      chance meeting with you
          leads to afternoon delight
                 accidental tryst
                      ~~~~~~

                                 Chris B.
                                Oct. 2002
                                   ~~~~
                                  

© Copyright 2002 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-12 07:20 PM



Whoa!
This sizzles!

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2 posted 2002-10-12 07:24 PM


Now that's what I would call a fun time senryu!

EA

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3 posted 2002-10-12 07:27 PM


Karilea - ya think so? Good, I'm glad you liked it. hugs to you.

EarthAngel - it was fun writing it - thanks.Oh, about my "baby" as I mentioned in the signing of your poem.....I was blessed with her at age 18. Thanks for the compliment.


Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

[This message has been edited by Nightshade (10-12-2002 07:34 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-10-12 07:56 PM


Whoa, girl, that was some afternoon!  

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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5 posted 2002-10-12 07:59 PM


ahhh ahhh oooo oooo this is one spicy senryu

...c'mon somebody was plannin' here, even if it was Cupid...(smiles)
enjoyed this!
Cher

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Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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6 posted 2002-10-12 08:01 PM


Singing"aaaaaaffffteeerrrrnnnooonn delight...."Good memorys.

paladin

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7 posted 2002-10-12 08:15 PM


Marti - It was "delightful"...thanks for reading and signing.

Cher - I'll never tell.... Thanks!!

paladin - lol...yes, I have been singing that tune since I wrote this. Thankyou for your comments.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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8 posted 2002-10-12 08:39 PM


GOOD ONE CHRIS!!
Save me some candy apple!
~Hugs and luv ya, Teed!~

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9 posted 2002-10-12 08:51 PM


NancyLee - Thanks for signing. Ummmm....I tried to save you some candy apple....but..I..ummm....SORRY!! Oh well, you used to eat my icecream cones when we were little and I didn't complain....MUCH!! Love & miss ya sister of mine.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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10 posted 2002-10-12 08:59 PM


fancy meeting you
rather fine weather today
so, how have you been?



(smiles) Yay, I love this, sweet firend, this is a swonderful feeling indeed when by suprise such pleasant visits can occur! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2002-10-12 09:08 PM


Noah - thankyou friend for your sweet reply.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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12 posted 2002-10-12 09:09 PM



You mean....the whole afternoon

LOL hope you had a great time

Titia

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13 posted 2002-10-12 09:11 PM


Sounds like an interesting afternoon.
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14 posted 2002-10-12 09:11 PM


Titia - oh, lol.....you snuck in while I was thanking Noah. Now let me see....was it ALL afternoon? I'll let you decide. Thanks dear lady.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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15 posted 2002-10-12 09:13 PM


Michael - interesting as all get out!!   Thankyou dear poet.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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16 posted 2002-10-12 09:19 PM


nice write Chris...red candy apples and ice cream...red candy apples for Enchantress and ice cream for you...

...believe what your heart feels.....

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17 posted 2002-10-12 09:52 PM


scorpio - thanks for reading and commenting. But, can't my sister and I have BOTH ice cream AND candy apples? Ummm....and maybe some candy floss too? lol.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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18 posted 2002-10-12 09:57 PM


Nightshade - h'mmmm, where was that we met?

BC

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19 posted 2002-10-12 10:03 PM


I'm not sure you and Enchantress would share...*S*

...believe what your heart feels.....

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20 posted 2002-10-12 10:16 PM


Sweet afternoon, sensual words.  Nicely done.
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21 posted 2002-10-12 10:40 PM


Bill - Shhhhh!! lol. Thankyou & hugs

scorpio - We promise we'll share..lol.

Gemini - Thankyou for your comments.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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