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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-10-12 02:00 PM



There is nothing on the edge
of mind that tells of me.
Deep within thought
are the pictures grand.
Marvelous visions of past,
of real, of dreams and such,
that I wish to show to you.

Would you then, reach deep
within and share with me
the core of you. The essence
of your life that is essential.
Pour upon me your world?

For perhaps in this coupling
will be understanding, and at last,
the togetherness we seek.

WhiteRose

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-12 02:46 PM




(sigh) Oh Anne, your poetry just keeps getting better and better, sweet friend, I love how you go above and beyond in this, this is gently whimsical, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-10-12 06:28 PM


I love this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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just out of reach
3 posted 2002-10-12 06:50 PM


Lovely!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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perhaps
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