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Krissy
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 556
kent England

0 posted 2002-10-12 10:35 AM


Remembing


As I sit here waiting
For my mum and Keth
To come back

The villa seems
So quite and peaceful
As I remember what
We have done over the
Last couple of weeks

It makes me happy to
Be with people who
Love and care for me
I have enjoyed my
Stay in Amercia

The people who I have
Seen have made me feel
Very welcome and brought
Me into the little group
Margie, Bill, Balladeer
Nakedthoughts to name
Just a few

But I am glad to
Go home to see
My partner, my sister
And brother, my dad
And my cat(Blossom)
To name just a few more

I will remember all of you
In my mind and heart
Of hearts, but I am glad
To get home again soon


Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

© Copyright 2002 Krissy P J Searle - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
1 posted 2002-10-12 10:43 AM



My heart just made a leap, this is just a beautiful way to describe those weeks.

I'm really glad you 'just came along for MOM'

I would have missed you if you hadn't.

Sweetheart, have a good flight home

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2002-10-12 10:53 AM


This poem has touched me, I'm so glad we could meet, if only by chance. I suppose I should thank your mother for bringing you.
keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2002-10-12 10:55 AM



You've enjoyed a trip
to last your remembering days
look back on it fondly...
and plan to come back, some day soon,
to meet even more poets of heart...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-12 02:10 PM




(smiles) Oh Krissy, I am delighted you had such a wonderful time, sweet friend, we all are blessed to have a wonderful friend like you and I wish I could have been there too! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful and heartwarming, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
5 posted 2002-10-12 10:40 PM


Hey, sweet Krissy!! We enjoyed you, too, but you are right that it is always good to get home.....just be sure to come back some day!!!
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