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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-10-12 07:57 AM


My Love

You are to me the fairest of rare
The essence of love placed in my care
My piece of forever’s magical mist
The match to my soul eternity kissed.

You are the holder of my heart
Of immemorial start and
This life is but a moment’s light
To know the pleasure of your sight

You are the force of essence course
The very power and the source
You are my love the meaning of
The goal and soul of Eden’s love

You are the other part of me
That touches life and sets me free.
You are Pandora of the box
That frees me of this paradox.

For you began and end my goal
In other words you are my soul


© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2002-10-12 09:05 AM


Awwww! This is so sweet. She is a very lucky lady to have someone like you.
Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-10-12 09:13 AM


Beautiful morning read Sy!
This one sure did make me...*SIGH*
~Morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-10-12 09:27 AM



Sy, please don't think I haven't been reading you each day...I have...my time's been constrained...
but 'tis Saturday, my day of read, and respond...

and my day of sigh...

regards2you
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4 posted 2002-10-12 09:32 AM


Lovely. Now, would you please just hurry up and clone yourself. Oh, silly me. There are no words to describe this magnificient masterpiece.
Thank you.

With Warm Regards,
Pat  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2002-10-12 10:01 AM


You are the other part of me
That touches life and sets me free.

Seymour - I love this!! Thankyou. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-10-12 10:05 AM


enjoyed
Marsha
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7 posted 2002-10-12 10:17 AM


Seymour darling man, I'm so much a regular at the library that I think they will give us nametags soon. I simply have to come to read you. Keth is off in about an hour but we couldn't miss our chance to meld our hearts to yours.

As always darling man you write divinely and you know I utterly utterly utterly adore it, and you too.

Tres bon tu est formidable.

They don't let us have long though so no time to write you a little ditty, so I'm sending warm hugs and lots of love
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

regards2you
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8 posted 2002-10-12 10:36 AM


I want to edit my previous post but it hasn't come up yet.

Whenever things are serious, I find I often crack stupid jokes, which take away from the quality of what is before me. I beg your pardon.

This is a serious tribute to what is a fantastic love....

I thank you for sharing your feelings with us.

And even if you were cloned, I personally could only bow before you,
curtsy once, and back out of the room.

Sincerely,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Kethry
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9 posted 2002-10-12 10:47 AM


You are the gleam of summer sun
its warming rays when day is done
you are the light that calls the day
the breath of hope in come what may

you are the romance at the start
the ending love that holds the heart
you are the springtime and the rain
the promised hope that comes again

You are the one who makes me whole
the sunshine to my shadowed soul
your gleams of light shine down on me
you love constrains and sets me free

you are the writer of my dreams
the other part of me it seems

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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10 posted 2002-10-12 12:29 PM


the goal and soul of Eden's love....yes Sy,
I think this says it well....

Ivy Rose
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11 posted 2002-10-12 12:45 PM


Seymour...A stunning, heartfelt, poem of love. I stand in awe of the love you have written about here.  ***Ivy Rose
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12 posted 2002-10-12 02:00 PM



The essence of love placed in my care

My piece of forever's magical mist
The match to my soul eternity kissed.

You are the holder of my heart
Of immemorial start
====================================
You are my love the meaning of
===================================

You are the other part of me
That touches life and sets me free.
===================================
For you began and end my goal
In other words you are my soul

====================================


My goodness Stinkylove...look at you...
hanging the moon and making us all swoon.
How very lovely is this romantic declaration!!!
You turned couplets in cupids couple


Your rose of suppose inspires rhymes divine in your pen Sy-babes...


You are the other part of me
That touches life and sets me free.


How beautiful is that thought!!

all thats left to say is....


SIGH








Janet Marie
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13 posted 2002-10-12 02:02 PM


that wasnt loud enough....

SIGH


Janet Marie
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14 posted 2002-10-12 02:04 PM


A moth can do better than that!!!


((((((SIGH))))))




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15 posted 2002-10-12 02:34 PM




(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, she is so very lucky and may true love always fill both your hearts and may the only thing from Pandora's Box that fills your hearts be hope the love will always go on! (big hugggssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2002-10-12 03:57 PM


To all that comment on this poem I thank you dearly. I am using a new computer and not to sure of what I am doing. But with a little time and practice I will overcome.

JM,
Wonderful reply, I tried to write you an Email with my new Email but not sure it went through. If you didn't get mail, let me know and I'll try and find out why.
WWRS

Janet Marie
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17 posted 2002-10-12 04:19 PM


Did not receive it Sy-babes...
did you get the pics I sent last week before your computer switch?
we'll keep doing this till we get it right. *L*


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18 posted 2002-10-12 04:37 PM


awwwww how beautiful penned *sigh*
loved it!

Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2002-10-12 07:29 PM


Charisma,
Thank you dear.

JM,
Found the problem and sent that email.

JamesMichael
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20 posted 2002-10-13 03:08 AM


Very nice Seymour...James
Earth Angel
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21 posted 2002-10-13 03:24 AM


Mr. T., I'm speechless!

Cop out, I know, but never the less, I'm speechless!

EA

Elizabeth Santos
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22 posted 2002-10-13 06:15 AM


Sy, This is so beautiful. You place your thoughts so delicately on the page. Enjoyed reading
Liz

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23 posted 2002-10-13 10:02 AM


This speaks of a love brewed in passion steeped in devotion...and drunk everyday...beautiful Seymour...did you show this gem to your Pandora??

...believe what your heart feels.....

Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 2002-10-13 11:58 AM


James,
Thank you kind sir.

Earth Angel,
Love your comments.

Elizabeth,
Thank you my dear and I pray that you stay well.

Scorpio,
LOL not yet.

Bill Charles
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25 posted 2002-10-13 04:28 PM


Seymour - a lovely write for your lady...

BC

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26 posted 2002-10-14 10:17 AM


Who could ask for anymore
Seymour Tabin
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27 posted 2002-10-14 07:42 PM


Bill,
Thank you for the read and comment.

Ruth,
Big hug, thank you dear.

Martie
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28 posted 2002-10-15 07:39 PM


Sy

Love this love!

Seymour Tabin
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29 posted 2002-10-15 09:20 PM


Martie,
You are a love.

Madame Chipmunk
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30 posted 2002-10-16 12:06 PM


This is all the sweeter for having met the lovely lady for whom it was so obviously written...
~ loving chipmunk hugs to both of you

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Larry C
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31 posted 2002-10-16 12:55 PM


Sy,
How did you live to be so young? Wisdom can rhyme so well. I love it.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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32 posted 2002-10-16 01:15 AM


Mr. Seymour, (I feel I should call you that for some reason...probably because you write with such wisdom and so elegantly) I love your love poems so much. Thanks, Mr. Sy, for sharing your heart and your feelings with us.
With Love To All,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-16-2002 01:16 AM).]

Muys
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33 posted 2002-10-16 07:36 AM


Seymour it is realy a Love song
Beautyful. Muys

Muys
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34 posted 2002-10-16 07:44 AM


Seymour it is realy a love song {beautyful}
Muys.

Muys
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35 posted 2002-10-16 07:57 AM


Seymour
It is really a love song
Beautifull
Muys

Seymour Tabin
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36 posted 2002-10-16 08:34 AM


Lyra,
Thank you sweet, it was our pleasure to meet you and your prince charming.

Larry C,
You are a true friend, thank you.

Ethel,
It was my pleasure to share it. Thank you dear.

Muys
I believe you, I believe you, I believe you.
LOL and Thank you.

Titia Geertman
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37 posted 2002-10-16 03:00 PM



Hi Sy, I think my MOM is a great fan LOL.

Nah, she didn't noticed there were 2 page to this poem, so she thought her answer didn't came through and put two more in

Great poem.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Seymour Tabin
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38 posted 2002-10-16 03:30 PM


Titia,
I understand and thank you for explaning,

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39 posted 2002-10-16 03:53 PM




  

Let there be peace on earth, and let it begin with me.

Seymour Tabin
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40 posted 2002-10-16 04:45 PM


Sharon,
Thank you sweet.

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